HERO NOTE — Shortest hero of the three: the screen below carries the argument.
C2 · the product, full width — carries the whole argument
HERO PRODUCT SHOT — the largest single element on the page · 16:10
The owner-level view: agents down the left, where each one's deals sit
across the top, what needs the owner's attention highlighted.
does this view exist? confirm with Chris or MarioThis is the load-bearing risk in Layout C. Everything else on this page
works; the hero shot is a promise we may not be able to make yet. If it
does not exist, C either waits or becomes a roadmap page — and a roadmap
page is a weak ad landing page.
ALTERNATE HERE? If the downline view is not real, the strongest
substitute is the Peach Quote carrier-match screen, which is live — but then
C stops being an owner-visibility page and starts being an agent-tool page,
which is what the existing site already does. Worth Tyler knowing that
before he picks.
C3 · where deals stall — three columns
01 · what you can finally see
[Headline — three places a deal dies quietly]
STALL 1
[small icon or micro-screenshot]
[e.g. quoted, never applied]
[1–2 lines — what the owner sees and what he does about it]
STALL 2
[small icon or micro-screenshot]
[e.g. applied to the wrong carrier]
[1–2 lines]
STALL 3
[small icon or micro-screenshot]
[e.g. new agent stopped calling]
[1–2 lines]
C4 · the system — live today vs roadmap
02 · what runs now, what is next
[Headline — Peach Quote is live; the rest is next]
Live today
Peach Quote
[1 line — quoting and underwriting guidance]
Roadmap
Historical call review
[1 line]
Roadmap
Coaching
[1 line]
Roadmap
Recycled leads
[1 line]
Roadmap
Automated follow-up
[1 line]
C5 · product detail — the carrier read
03 · on the call today
[Headline — what your newest agent sees on the call]
[Supporting text — which carrier guides appear to fit the client's answers,
side by side, before the application goes out.]
COMPLIANCE LINE — required. The carrier reviews the completed
application and decides. Peach Pilot does not underwrite.
PRODUCT SHOT SLOT · Peach Quote carrier-match result
[age/DOB · state · tobacco · face amount → up to 3 carriers side by side]
REAL CARRIER LOGOS
C6 · you keep the override
DIAGRAM SLOT · image LEFT, text right
The management line moves off the owner's desk; the override does not move.
04 · what does not change
[Headline — the management moves, the override stays]
[Supporting text — same promise as A4, arriving late here as reassurance
rather than as the pitch. The owner has already been shown the product,
so this answers "what does this cost me structurally?"]
The point that matters
[The override point — one sentence, stated plainly]
THE OVERRIDE POINT — the sentence that matters most to an IMO owner.
It needs its own emphasis, not a bullet.
[Headline — built for the trust this business runs on]
CLAIM 1 — SOC 2 readiness in progress. Readiness, never certification.
CLAIM 2 — security controls reviewed with your team under NDA. Links to /security.
DATA-HANDLING NOTE — C shows more client-level data on screen than A or
B, so any screenshot used here needs synthetic data only. No real client
names, DOBs, or health answers, ever, even blurred.
C9 · closing CTA (pilot ask)
[Closing CTA headline — the pilot ask]
[Five to ten agents, the smallest reversible slice, and you keep the rest.]
[reassurance under the button — one dated next step, no signature on terms today]
NOTE — C has no three-step "how it starts" band. The steps are folded
into this closing block instead, which makes C the shortest of the three.
Tyler: too thin, or better?CLOSING HEADLINE GUIDANCE — Pick the cohort. Agree the measures. Set the date.