STAGE 1 — STRUCTURE ONLY. Placeholder text throughout. Feedback wanted on section order and the angle, not copy or design.

Landing page for agency owners · uplines · IMO owners

Three structures. Same promise, different order.

Each page below is the same landing page arranged a different way. Every headline and paragraph is a labeled placeholder that says what will go there, so the thing under review is the angle and the section order — nothing else. Design and copy come after.

Layout A

You ran out of desk

Opens on the owner's own hours as the bottleneck. Every agent you contract needs an hour at your desk, so your hours scale with your recruiting. Peach Pilot is the second desk, and you keep the override. Follows the agency deck Tyler picked on Aug 16.

Open Layout A →
Layout B

One in ten make it

Opens on the washout cost the owner already absorbs — the nine recruits who never produced were his contracts, his onboarding hours, his lead spend. The second-desk promise arrives mid-page as the answer instead of the opening.

Open Layout B →
Layout C

See your whole downline

Product-led. Opens on the screen rather than an argument: the owner sees every agent and where each deal stalls, instead of finding out at month end. The shortest of the three.

Open Layout C →

Three things flagged inside the pages, not decided quietly

One ask before any of this goes public